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Sunday, September 04, 2005

Pain

Trust me I wasn't feeling very good (emotionally) when I wrote this...


I felt it before, I felt it again
My heart sinking and hands tied with a chain.
It makes me feel empty, it makes me go insane,
These are my feelings when I'm going through pain.

I feel like being showered totally in acid rain,
Which will therefore, cause all my blood to drain.
I feel like I've been left desperate for a single piece of grain,
This is how it feels when you are left alone in pain.

Blood splashing out when your head is hit by a cane,
Or, you been squelched hard by a cruising train,
Or, just like jumping from a sixty foot high crane,
These are similar to the way I feel my pain.

I have seen that big red stain,
Which is somewhere inside my brain,
I know it only gives me losses and no gain,
Yet, I still can't overcome my pain.

4 comments:

angrydxb said...

Really Touching...

kool-till-the-end said...

thanks....it was from the bottom of my heart (or well atleast that was the idea!! hehe :p)

Anonymous said...

Awesome man.. Jus read 1.. It was really really wonderful.. Touched me..

kool-till-the-end said...

thanks a lot mate :)

glad u liked it...appreciate the comment :)