Wishing upon a falling star
Always wondering where you are
Feeling that you miss me too
My life has turned all subdue
My soul is lacking your passion
Sensing a growing obsession
Your thoughts make me feel timid
I can still see your face vivid
Speculations arose that you are around
Within my heart, your voices resound
But my wishes continue to turn into ashes
My words reprise and haunt me as lashes
As days pass, I continue to wither
Remembering the days when I would dither
Seeing you soon is the wish upon which I thrive
And that is my life, upon which I survive
10 comments:
yaar,
u make me all emotional
Wishing upon a falling star
Always wondering where you are
beautiful lines
well the fact that the poem made you emotional means that you can relate to it...and that's a good thing, isn't it? :)
by the way, those lines are very similar to "twinkle twinkle little star"...don't you agree?
i dont think so
ya maybe last 2-3 words of the sentece are same
but u changed the whole meaning of the phrase
*we cant really call those sentece phrase, but i hope u got the meaning what i want to say *
good thing ??????
confused
well i did mean that its related to that poem in a good way...like both poems are talking about achieving something far far away;)
its a good thing (according to me) because it means that you can relate to the poem and hence its meaningful to you...if the poem had no effect, then it wouldn't be any good, would it? :)
:)
dont know wat to say
lol
u said enough as it is ;)
cheers!
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